I'd envision it looking better if it came forward about 6 inches more, and if the top surface matched the hood surface contour. Ie, as if you cut out a section from another hood 12 or 16 inches wide down the center from rear to front, stopping 12 to 15 inches from the front edge, set that strip a few inches above your hood, then gently blend from that to the outside of the raised "spears" kinda like a 396 hood along the sides. The rear could be like a 427 hood except follow the shape of the cowl vent, and the front mimic a 427 hood except with a wider opening (not higher opening); perhaps use a pair of 427 trim inserts trimmed & tweaked to make one wider insert?
Very much like what IH2LOSE did, except with softer rounded side contours blending the spears to the scoop top, and with a wide Z06/427-like scoop in front and a 427-like rear opening (although it would be best to block it off forward of the rear edge so you aren't dumping engine heat into the cowl vent, and keep it low as possible there to try not to completely block the airflow into the cowl vent... you might even consider built-in hidden enclosed ducts beneath the scoop on both sides, joined in the rear to direct cool air into the cowl vent).
Edit after your post, above: wow, 4 inches is a lot, and will likely block the cowl vent. Neat rendering... I'd suggest moving the front opening back 5 or 6 inches (on the lower sketch), bring the scoop surface (gently) lower at the front, as well, maybe 1.5 to 2 inches off the hood surface, widen the upper surface a bit, blend the opening forward a inch or two to the spears on each side, and and blend/round the sides more if possible.